[Tanisha]

I am gonna start studying from tomorrow, completed this study last night from a Russian master not sure but looked like a Russian head whatever that means.

If someone wants to join, be my guest!!

 

 

 

 

 

[Tanisha]

Yuup!! an improvement for sure!!

Since the reference had a darker background, everything else would surely appear lighter, in comparison, remember value is relational. Also, try to define the terminator while keeping in mind the form type, the halftones then should help roll the form.

Really glad you found this helpful!!

[Tanisha]

First I would try pushing the darks darker, since when you squint at it everything appears to be one value which in turn makes it look flat. Keeping the focal point in mind should help, then you can figure out where to put the most contrast. Second, the back leg is a little unsatisfactory, maybe because we can’t see the connection? Also, it seems to be creating a non-intentional tension point( a tangent) where both legs touch each other.

 

Hope this helps! Also, I hope your piece gets picked up so you can get much more amazing feedback!

[Tanisha]

Thank You for such lovely feedback!

[Tanisha]

Your structure is not sound, think like a sculptor, carve in and add as you modify primitives, making them more characteristic as you go. Your centerline needs to evolve as you go on add and subtracting forms, don’t rush to details, build from up from solid foundation. I don’t know if this will help or not.

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