[Dominika]

Hi Carlise!

The portrait is lovely, I can feel the presence of this woman.

What bothers me a bit is that left shoulder is a bit stiff. I suppose if the reflected light on it din’t have the same thickness on the whole length it would give her more life there.

The right side is just beautifuly disappearing in the background! Hear are great. I have maybe a bit weird feeling about her eyelashes. They might be separated like that, but gives some odd effect of repeating shape.

I wish to see more of your works when you emerge from Bargue:)

Cheers,

Dominika

[Dominika]

Hi Cora!

Thank you so much for such a careful look! And, yes, now I can see that. All these proportions. That’s why the head looks so big:) Thank you a lot, I’m going to run through it one more time.

Cheers,

Dominika

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