Hey Anthony! I think this looks great! I think in order to get that ‘masculine roughness’, the individual form and plane changes need to be defined more.
Darkening those midtones and slightly lightening the shadows should fix that. Notice how the planes on the tutor’s drawing are more defined.
Hopefully that helps, and again, it looks great!
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