Hi Joshua,
I’ve got a lot of those geometric exercises in my challenge too – great work! I like the portrait a lot. As a photographer I immediately want to lighten up the left eye as eyes are the key focus points for humans when we look at another face. The right eye has a lot of presence at stands out but the left eye’s detail is a bit lost in the shadow. I think it could still be in the shadow but still have presence, if that makes sense. It might be enough just to sharpen the pupil boundary up a little. Do you know what I mean?
Best wishes,
David.
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