Hi Peter,
I really like this drawing, and its particular attention to structure. The torso is well drawn and I’m really digging the delicate handling in the halftones. I think the drawing itself would read more “finished” if the lower legs were a little more structured, less “wavy” and drawn with light but more solid lines. I would be careful with particular poses such as this one where the pit of the neck, and the arms are obscured (the left arm in this case.) The reason for this is that in such poses, the limbs (and head) tend to look disconnected from the torso and this is particularly difficult to overcome in a drawing (from both an anatomical and a compositional standpoint.) I must say though, you’re doing a good job with it.
The head could use just the slightest bit more work, it feels too “underdrawn” in relation to the rest of the figure.
Overall, really great work!
Best,
Iliya
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