Myriam,
If possible could you light your drawings better when photographing them? It can be hard to appreciate the tones without the photos being dialed in.
I’d like to see more modeling of the interior (not out contours) of the form. I think you’re taking the Notan idea far but you need to now focus more on the Chiaroscuro side of it. So clear light and shadow side. Clear terminator/core shadow. Reflected light optional.
More drawings like that will help!
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