Looking for an honest critique

[Ana Gonzalez]

[ryokoseigo]

<p class=””>You would do well to perhaps have more color variety.  The lack of variety is causing a lack of depth.  There might also be an issue with contrast, but I’d need to set it to black and white to confirm.  With just reflected light alone you could make this image a whole lot more interesting, mostly brown in the white.  I posted an example below of a quick mockup of what I’m talking about, it’s not actually good, but it’s a start.</p>
https://imgur.com/a/p7U2NF5

 

• This reply was modified 4 years, 7 months ago by ryokoseigo.

[Tim]

Hi Ana

Lovely colours  I particularly like the velvety textures especially the cushion behind the dog  ,composition might benefit from more spe to the dogs left window side  I think you’ve really captured a moment and   I am being  honest

I really like the palette it reminds me of   Spanish artist (sorolla ) ?

 

Kind regards

 

Tim

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