Critique of Carlotta – Charcoal

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  • June 9, 2020 at 3:47 pm #576799
    Mariella Lawson
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    June 9, 2020 at 10:19 pm #577330
    Dominique DèveDominique Dève
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    Nice! For me, it could be better if you draw faster. I mean in my work with charcoal I try to avoid hesitation (you can go on my space) and keep construction and movement lines visible. I think it gives you more strength.

    June 12, 2020 at 12:36 pm #581024
    Clint Lewis
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    Nice structure, the anatomy is well defined! Pay attention to the hierarchy of values. I would definitely darken the background to have more Chiaroscuro.

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