Child figure sketches-any feedback appreciated

[srsanyal]

[Dominique Dève]

Good work.

[srsanyal]

Thanks.

[Smudge]

These are very sensitive drawings.  They have strong feeling to me, which I don’t think is easy to achieve. Great gesture and line quality.

The main thing that jumps out at me (in terms of critique) is the thigh on the boy in the first picture. It reads as being too big to me (but may just be the pose). Perhaps you could be a bit clearer about the planes of the thigh, too; it seems a little flat compared to the rest of the drawing.

Oh, and I REALLY LOVE the third drawing. Keep scrolling back to look at it. 🙂 Delicious lines and rhythms. Keep it up!

 

[srsanyal]

Thank you for your kind and inspiring words,much appreciated.

Yes,do agree,that the right thigh of the child looks a bit odd,i should have been more attentive towards proportion ,and making  my own interpretation rather than  following  the  original photograph rigidly.

[Tim]

Hi Srsanyal

Beautiful sketches as already stated lovey rythm flow subtle shading

Tim

[srsanyal]

Thanks Tim .

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