Thanks a lot for the ideas Sara! I agree it could definitely use more light in the clouds and tree in the foreground. Regarding filling up the rest of the trees, I don’t think I’ll actually do that, bit I wonder what you meant. The plan was to just represent a bit of trunk since they’re leafless right now in the beginning of spring. But maybe I should signal better their masses? It was really hard for me to decide on whay to do with them since the colors and values were so close between the branches and the background flat plan. I like the cow a bit, I think there’s maybe to much contrast in it. I guess I see what you mean regarding anatomy, but I’ll save this regard to next experiences. Thanks again for taking the time to critique, it was really helpful!
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