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  • July 17, 2020 at 4:42 pm #630225
    Dennis PostulaDennis Postula
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    Please critique, Glenn’s description of rhythms is outstandingvillpuVillpu2

    July 25, 2020 at 12:58 am #642525
    gregre
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    Hi Dennis,

    nice drawing. What I notice is that the torso and the neck feel stiff. Glenn is using the folds of the skin to show compression on one side and gives the other (symmetrical ) side a corresponding stretch to visualize the bend. His lesson the on the boxing gives a deeper view on why this happens and how you can approach it.

    Cheers, Gre

    July 25, 2020 at 7:48 am #642855
    Dennis PostulaDennis Postula
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    Thanks Gre,

    I see what you mean especially the neck/head on the second sketch. I was going to develop that one further on my wife interceded because she liked it the way it was. I’ve been re-drawing sketches to see if I can learn something from the first pass.

    July 28, 2020 at 2:10 pm #647191
    Joshua JacoboJoshua Jacobo
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    Nice. Try to get off of the outlines and focus more on the internal rhythmic lines.

    July 29, 2020 at 8:55 am #648139
    Dennis PostulaDennis Postula
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    Thank You Joshua

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